The doll chapter 1

Posted on December 4, 2013 by Deleted User
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1 Response to The doll chapter 1

  1. benedict says:
    December 6, 2013 at 8:28 pm

    I like it, but you have used the wrong ‘here!’ and there are no commas or exclamation marks. Overall, I loved it.

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