*. I like the idea of rhyming your story. *. I found your piece of writing very interesting, and clever. ! I think you should improve on trying to make your poem make sense. I found it quite hard to understand what was going on.
Comments are closed.
*. I like the idea of rhyming your story.
*. I found your piece of writing very interesting, and clever.
! I think you should improve on trying to make your poem make sense. I found it quite hard to understand what was going on.