100 wc week 14- shivers of pain

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  1. Miss T (Team 100WC) says:

    Dear Bryn,

    Your use of interesting language made this piece of writing so easy to read. I like the way that you included dialogue (talking), but remember to use a capital letter for the beginning of the speech. It was fantastic to see you offer some descriptions of the characters in your writing, well done.

    Miss T (Team 100WC)

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