Hi Nela, your range of sentences are amazing. The retorical questions make the reader really excited. Next time you could try and start your sentences with a different word than ‘I’.
Hi Nela, thanks for joining in this week. I love how you have used questions to add suspense for the reader. Your use of a rose bush to describe the sensation was fantastic – well done!
Hi Nela, your range of sentences are amazing. The retorical questions make the reader really excited. Next time you could try and start your sentences with a different word than ‘I’.
Hi Nela, thanks for joining in this week. I love how you have used questions to add suspense for the reader. Your use of a rose bush to describe the sensation was fantastic – well done!
Another fabulous piece of writing Nela. You really are talented!