100wcweek15

Posted on December 9, 2013 by Deleted User
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1 Response to 100wcweek15

  1. Lara says:
    December 9, 2013 at 8:06 pm

    I like how you have used lots of adjectives, and made your writing clear.
    I think you could work on where you put your punctuation!

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