PI Badger

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3 Responses to PI Badger

  1. zara says:

    This a really good piece of work but it sort of confused me! I like how you said he lit a cigar it easily know that he is a spy!

  2. Monique says:

    P.I. Badger is certainly an interesting fellow! I’ve always loved stories that had talking animals living as we do and you’ve brought them to life here in a creative way. Remember to put a comma in between young and tired next time.
    Good work here, I enjoyed your story. Keep Writing!

  3. Mrs D Team 100 says:

    I really like your story, it immediately captivated my attention. I think you should have written ‘dark purple waistcoat’ and not put it in parentheses. I really like the phrase ‘had an inkling’.

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