Hi Lauryn , I love all of the rhetorical questions that you used in this piece of writing . Great adjectives , maybe it’s just me but I didn’t really understand your story line. All in all I think you dud a very good bit of writing.
Wow Lauren, I really like description of all the painting tools and of the old man, You really put a picture in my head.
very descriptive This piece of writing is very good,Lorren
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Hi Lauryn , I love all of the rhetorical questions that you used in this piece of writing . Great adjectives , maybe it’s just me but I didn’t really understand your story line. All in all I think you dud a very good bit of writing.
Wow Lauren, I really like description of all the painting tools and of the old man, You really put a picture in my head.
very descriptive
This piece of writing is very good,Lorren