Amazing Jamie! I loved the bit when you said”I felt the cold night air hit me”
very good Jamie, you have used good description. I think you could improve by putting capital letters and checking your writing ( was sampan meant to be Sammie? ). But good
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Amazing Jamie! I loved the bit when you said”I felt the cold night air hit me”
very good Jamie, you have used good description. I think you could improve by putting capital letters and checking your writing ( was sampan meant to be Sammie? ). But good