Amazing Hazim I like the different things that you replaced for “said” like screamed and the use of grammar and punctuation for impact.Next time try to get a bit closer to one hundred words.but other than that amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WOW!!!Hazem you used really good descriptive language and I like the way that you had the main character in the book which is a good idea.
I love your story line. I love your punctuation. I mostly like your question where you said ‘Oh really?’ Don’t do more than 100 words
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Amazing Hazim I like the different things that you replaced for “said” like screamed and the use of grammar and punctuation for impact.Next time try to get a bit closer to one hundred words.but other than that amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WOW!!!Hazem you used really good descriptive language and I like the way that you had the main character in the book which is a good idea.
I love your story line. I love your punctuation. I mostly like your question where you said ‘Oh really?’ Don’t do more than 100 words