Hi Evan, nice bit of homework. You have really expressed your feelings and views about Abasi’s story. Next time you could split your writing into paragraphs so the reader knows when the subject is going to change. Really well done.
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Hi Evan, nice bit of homework. You have really expressed your feelings and views about Abasi’s story.
Next time you could split your writing into paragraphs so the reader knows when the subject is going to change. Really well done.