Wow Alexandra this is a great short story. I can see that you paid careful attention to your punctuation.
I wonder what happens next? Could you develop the story further?
That was really good story and I would like to no what happens next. However you started another line half way through a line at the last word. Otherwise well done!
Wow Alexandra this is a great short story. I can see that you paid careful attention to your punctuation.
I wonder what happens next? Could you develop the story further?
Wow Alexandra your stories amazing it
makes me want to read more so could
you do another one
Hi Armelle
I will write some more about the locket in the future.
hey alexandra i thought your story was realy good but to make it even better you could try to use a couple more describing words.
That was really good story and I would like to no what happens next. However you started another line half way through a line at the last word. Otherwise well done!