Great Freddie I like the adjectives and the youse of rhetorical questions next time try and get a it closer to one hundred words.but overall amazing’!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!’.
WOW!!! Freddie that is an amazing piece of work you had lots of descriptive language and amazingly tense feeling about it . It’s my favourite piece of work I have done .
Great Freddie I like the adjectives and the youse of rhetorical questions next time try and get a it closer to one hundred words.but overall amazing’!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!’.
WOW!!! Freddie that is an amazing piece of work you had lots of descriptive language and amazingly tense feeling about it . It’s my favourite piece of work I have done .