I really like your writing because it explains the story and has a lot of your feelings. Next time maybe use some adjectives.
Hi Jack, I like your amazing use of fellings. Maybe next time use subtitles so if someone wants to find out about one thing they can find it a bit quicker.
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I really like your writing because it explains the story and has a lot of your feelings. Next time maybe use some adjectives.
Hi Jack,
I like your amazing use of fellings. Maybe next time use subtitles so if someone wants to find out about one thing they can find it a bit quicker.