Abasi’s story

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3 Responses to Abasi’s story

  1. Oscar says:

    Good work! I like the way you have set it up. Nexst tim maybe put a bit more infomatson foe each subtitile.

  2. Kailen says:

    Ted I love all of the differnet bits of punctuation.

    Also your wrighting is very orginised.

  3. Sam says:

    Good work ted. I think your work is outstanding. I love all your paragraphs and subtitles. Next time add a clause.

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