A good try with this week’s prompt, Hazem. Some good vocabulary in your piece, but there are one or two things you need to think about for next time. It’s really important that you stick to the wordcount, this week it was 100 plus the 4 in the prompt, so a maximum of 104 words. This makes you think really carefully about every single word you use. Secondly, punctuation helps to make sense of a piece of writing, Perhaps you could read over this again and see where full stops could have been added. I look forward to seeing what you come up with next time…. keep up the writing 🙂
A good try with this week’s prompt, Hazem. Some good vocabulary in your piece, but there are one or two things you need to think about for next time. It’s really important that you stick to the wordcount, this week it was 100 plus the 4 in the prompt, so a maximum of 104 words. This makes you think really carefully about every single word you use. Secondly, punctuation helps to make sense of a piece of writing, Perhaps you could read over this again and see where full stops could have been added. I look forward to seeing what you come up with next time…. keep up the writing 🙂