Hey Izzy,
I really like the stuff you wrote. I liked it because you did short sentences. I also liked it because you wrote I think its cat food. Can you please next time please put spaces between the full stop and the first letter apart from that absolutely GREAT!
Hey Izzy,
I really like the stuff you wrote. I liked it because you did short sentences. I also liked it because you wrote I think its cat food. Can you please next time please put spaces between the full stop and the first letter apart from that absolutely GREAT!
To Isabelle
After this story…. do you still like custard? I think you have put me off eating custard ever again! 🙂
Your writing has a good flow and is sequenced well. You have included adjectives to add interest to your writing.
Great job!
From Mrs Natusch
team 100WC
NZ