A LONG WALK TO WATER

Posted on February 10, 2014 by Deleted User
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4 Responses to A LONG WALK TO WATER

  1. Sophie3 says:
    February 10, 2014 at 11:27 am

    Hi Neve,
    I really like your adjectives, and I liked how you used first person. It was a very gripping poem. I look forward to reading another one of your poems.

    • Neve says:
      February 10, 2014 at 11:34 am

      Thanks sophie, I will try to write some more
      If you look on older posts you will see one of mine called my pig its my favorite.

  2. Abi says:
    February 10, 2014 at 11:34 am

    Hi Neve,
    I love your poem espeshaly how it has so much fealings.
    Also I rilly like your adjectivs!
    However on the 13th and 16th line the ‘I’ is not a capital.
    Abi

  3. Josephine says:
    February 10, 2014 at 11:39 am

    Hi Neve,

    I really like your descriptive poem.I also like your titel it rally suits the poem.However, you need to check
    over your work, with capatil letters.I can’t wait to read the next piece.

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