THE WATER FALL

Posted on February 10, 2014 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to THE WATER FALL

  1. Zack says:
    February 10, 2014 at 11:30 am

    Well done. I really liked the way you magpied the ideas from another poem. Great rhyme. Next time try to make your poem a tiny bit longer.
    Great work.

  2. Oscar says:
    February 10, 2014 at 11:40 am

    Hi Jack,
    Amazing poem the rymes are amazing. Next time maybe make it a line or two longer.

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