I liked how you amagained the water was on a jorney going to be avaporated and start you journey again. I liked how you have the questions reapeted when you start your journey. Naby seperate the poem in to verses.
Louis
Wow Maya! I was tottaly amazed bye that peacw of wrighting on the other hand I think you should have used a few more breaks like full stops.
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I liked how you amagained the water was on a jorney going to be avaporated and start you journey again.
I liked how you have the questions reapeted when you start your journey.
Naby seperate the poem in to verses.
Louis
Wow Maya! I was tottaly amazed bye that peacw of wrighting on the other hand I think you should have used a few more breaks like full stops.