Hi Ryan. Thank you sharing this story for the 100 word challenge. You used some great words to add interest to your story, such as ‘hurriedly’ and ‘yanked’. To make this story even better you could say how you reacted when your mum told you it was a leap year.
Hi Ryan. Thank you sharing this story for the 100 word challenge. You used some great words to add interest to your story, such as ‘hurriedly’ and ‘yanked’. To make this story even better you could say how you reacted when your mum told you it was a leap year.
Hi Ryan, I really liked your 100 wc it was brilliant.
But maybe you could tell us how you felt when your
Mum told you it was a leap year