Good work Charlotte.
– I liked how you used paragraphs.
– I liked the way you used adjectives.
– I liked the way the spellings were correct.
– Try to use a simile next time.
Wow Charlotte! I love this blog.You have used onomatopoea and a rhetorical question!
You can also vary your scentince lengths and one time you used a fraction!!!
Next time maybe you could use a subordinate clause?
All the same this is a truly fantastic blog.
Well done!!!☺
Good work Charlotte.
– I liked how you used paragraphs.
– I liked the way you used adjectives.
– I liked the way the spellings were correct.
– Try to use a simile next time.
Wow Charlotte! I love this blog.You have used onomatopoea and a rhetorical question!
You can also vary your scentince lengths and one time you used a fraction!!!
Next time maybe you could use a subordinate clause?
All the same this is a truly fantastic blog.
Well done!!!☺