Hi Lucas,
Good efort on making a song, I realy liked it. It was good of you to make it rhyme. Were did you get your info? I’d realy want to know. Mabey you could refrance it? Try reading it and putting some commas in, at times I found it hard to read. Well done!
Hi Lucas,
Good efort on making a song, I realy liked it. It was good of you to make it rhyme. Were did you get your info? I’d realy want to know. Mabey you could refrance it? Try reading it and putting some commas in, at times I found it hard to read. Well done!
hi,Lucas,
i found It quite funny. To make it even better why not say why they were fat or slim.
Constable class read your song in ICT. Louis thought it was ‘really good’ and Dan said it was brilliant!