Well done Rosa! You have some excellent ideas and you have shown that you are capable of using some descriptive language and similes in our work. I really like your simile ‘the wind howled like a pack of wolves calling to the moon.’
Next time you write a blog I would like you to make sure you read your work through and edit your work. Think about when you pause and where you need to add in commas and full stops. A great first blog though!
Well done Rosa! You have some excellent ideas and you have shown that you are capable of using some descriptive language and similes in our work. I really like your simile ‘the wind howled like a pack of wolves calling to the moon.’
Next time you write a blog I would like you to make sure you read your work through and edit your work. Think about when you pause and where you need to add in commas and full stops. A great first blog though!