Excellent Zacky! This is a great piece of writing and I love the way you have used short sentences to vary the pace of your writing. You have described the effect your sister has had on you very well and you have been able to bring humour to your writing whilst doing this!
– To be able to add subordinate clauses into your writing.
Excellent Zacky! This is a great piece of writing and I love the way you have used short sentences to vary the pace of your writing. You have described the effect your sister has had on you very well and you have been able to bring humour to your writing whilst doing this!
– To be able to add subordinate clauses into your writing.