Fantastic Ben! What a great blog. Anyone reading this will be able to see how important your cat is to you. You have also demonstrated that you can use some excellent similes within your writing.
– You have done a great of trying to vary your punctuation within this blog. Perhaps next time you could even try and use a rhetorical question?
WOW! This is a great blog Ben.
– I really liked the way you described your cat.
– I especially like it when you said ‘He has stripes as black as midnight’.
– Next time try to use alliteration. E.g cool cute cat.
Fantastic Ben! What a great blog. Anyone reading this will be able to see how important your cat is to you. You have also demonstrated that you can use some excellent similes within your writing.
– You have done a great of trying to vary your punctuation within this blog. Perhaps next time you could even try and use a rhetorical question?
WOW! This is a great blog Ben.
– I really liked the way you described your cat.
– I especially like it when you said ‘He has stripes as black as midnight’.
– Next time try to use alliteration. E.g cool cute cat.
good idea Miss Essex I will use a rhetorical question thank you for the help Miss Essex.
Ben
I liked the way you described your cat and you said how it looks like you need to put more writeing