You used lots of good adjectives, I could picture everything in my head! Also I like your use of vocabulary. I think you could make your piece of writing longer and more of a story. How did a venomous snake suddenly appear!?
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You used lots of good adjectives, I could picture everything in my head! Also I like your use of vocabulary. I think you could make your piece of writing longer and more of a story. How did a venomous snake suddenly appear!?