Hi Ben! I really liked how you could fit every thing in your whole paragraph! well done with your punctuation! Looks like you had a great time at Christmas. You could add some more adjectives. Moreover it was a great peace off work!
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Hi Ben!
I really liked how you could fit every thing in your whole paragraph!
well done with your punctuation! Looks like you had a great time at Christmas.
You could add some more adjectives.
Moreover it was a great peace off work!