I loved how you described your dog boris i amagen how lovely he looks and you have incloded lots of amazing words so well don i relly enjoed it .
Nice similes and description between your writing and excellent variation of punctuation, perhaps next time try to make a bit longer. but apart from that well done!!!
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I loved how you described your dog boris i amagen how lovely he looks and you have incloded lots of amazing words so well don i relly enjoed it .
Nice similes and description between your writing and excellent variation of punctuation, perhaps next time try to make a bit longer. but apart from that well done!!!