It was very good and very spookyMabey next time you could put more figiritive language e.g similies and metephores.
I really liked your blog because it reminded me of when I went trick or treating on Halloween this year, and I went through a graveyard and I spooked me out of my socks.
STAR- Good adjectives when used mysterious
STAR- I liked your use of a short sentence
WISH- Mabey you could wright a bit more!
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It was very good and very spookyMabey next time you could put more figiritive language e.g similies and metephores.
I really liked your blog because it reminded me of when I went trick or treating on Halloween this year, and I went through a graveyard and I spooked me out of my socks.
STAR- Good adjectives when used mysterious
STAR- I liked your use of a short sentence
WISH- Mabey you could wright a bit more!