I loved the description of the eyes it was great! the poem reminds me of my dog when she was a puppy.remember to put punctuation at the end of each line.
this poem is very good and i really like it because the language used is good and the description is good and it reminds me of when i walk my friends puppy every Saturday morning. could you use some similes and metaphors and maybe make it a bit longer? i think that this poem is very good.
I love this poem! You used a variety of brilliant adjectives. The puppy sounds adorable and, you described him very well. I think you could use some figurative language. Why doesn’t he have fur on his belly? Most dogs do.
I loved the description of the eyes it was great! the poem reminds me of my dog when she was a puppy.remember to put punctuation at the end of each line.
this poem is very good and i really like it because the language used is good and the description is good and it reminds me of when i walk my friends puppy every Saturday morning. could you use some similes and metaphors and maybe make it a bit longer? i think that this poem is very good.
I love this poem! You used a variety of brilliant adjectives. The puppy sounds adorable and, you described him very well. I think you could use some figurative language. Why doesn’t he have fur on his belly? Most dogs do.