Well done. I think you will a hive to be a cricket player. I already know that you are amazing at cricket. I like how it’s just simple and short and in big handwriting, because that’s what caught my eye to read it. I am really happy. Though you could make it longer and many add in why you wanted to be a cricket player. So next time you carry on or either do a knew one just do the things I told you to improve on.
Well done. I think you will a hive to be a cricket player. I already know that you are amazing at cricket. I like how it’s just simple and short and in big handwriting, because that’s what caught my eye to read it. I am really happy. Though you could make it longer and many add in why you wanted to be a cricket player. So next time you carry on or either do a knew one just do the things I told you to improve on.
Well done
Commented by Selin.