Wow Jessica, very dramatic. I realy felt for that girl. I realy like the bit when you say ‘howling winds’ and ‘sand and soil stung my eyes’ because they gave me a real picture of what was going on. I would love to see a sequal because if there where on I would by it. Well done.
Wow Jessica, very dramatic. I realy felt for that girl. I realy like the bit when you say ‘howling winds’ and ‘sand and soil stung my eyes’ because they gave me a real picture of what was going on. I would love to see a sequal because if there where on I would by it. Well done.