Hi Grace!
Don’t you just hate the English weather?
You have used lots of great descriptive words and phrases such as “the heavens opened” and “sickly”.
The only improvement is that once you wrote “of” when it’s supposed to be “off”.
Well done and keep posting as your work is great to read!
😉
Hi Grace!
Don’t you just hate the English weather?
You have used lots of great descriptive words and phrases such as “the heavens opened” and “sickly”.
The only improvement is that once you wrote “of” when it’s supposed to be “off”.
Well done and keep posting as your work is great to read!
😉