Hi Evie,
Very well done. You are one of the many that have put many wondeful bloggings up and this is one. I like it when you describe the cherry blossoms I also like the bit about make up. Overall you have used alot of very descriptive words and passages but many I say it didn’t make sence. See where you think I mean. Good work.
Hi Evie,
This piece of writing is really good, basically because I can relate to it. My little brother is so annoying!
This is really descriptive and has lots of good words. However, you’ve used little twice and haven’t said what actually happened to your homework.
This is great though, please can you write a sequel?
🙂
Hi Evie,
Very well done. You are one of the many that have put many wondeful bloggings up and this is one. I like it when you describe the cherry blossoms I also like the bit about make up. Overall you have used alot of very descriptive words and passages but many I say it didn’t make sence. See where you think I mean. Good work.
Hi Evie,
This piece of writing is really good, basically because I can relate to it. My little brother is so annoying!
This is really descriptive and has lots of good words. However, you’ve used little twice and haven’t said what actually happened to your homework.
This is great though, please can you write a sequel?
🙂
spiders and brothers!