Hi Grace,
I really like this idea. You have used lots of great adjectives such as “pristine” and “cruel”.
The ONLY bad things are that the T.V program should have speech marks and that instead of the word white about the door, it could be about winter weather instead.
Anyway,
This is really refreshing to read as it describes the house so well.
🙂
Hi Grace,
I really like this idea. You have used lots of great adjectives such as “pristine” and “cruel”.
The ONLY bad things are that the T.V program should have speech marks and that instead of the word white about the door, it could be about winter weather instead.
Anyway,
This is really refreshing to read as it describes the house so well.
🙂