Hello Jessica,
Your work was very good but your sentences could have done with a bit more building. The choice of adjectives you used were great and I liked the way you completely changed the theme of the 100 Word Challenge. Keep up the good work.
From Rafi.
Hello Jessica,
Your work was very good but your sentences could have done with a bit more building. The choice of adjectives you used were great and I liked the way you completely changed the theme of the 100 Word Challenge. Keep up the good work.
From Rafi.