Hi Grace,
This is a very good piece that has a great idea. The ONLY bad things are that at one point you switched tenses and you missed out a few words. Apart from that, it was fantastic and really well written.
Keep on blogging because your posts are absolutely brilliant! 😉
Hi Grace,
This is a very good piece that has a great idea. The ONLY bad things are that at one point you switched tenses and you missed out a few words. Apart from that, it was fantastic and really well written.
Keep on blogging because your posts are absolutely brilliant! 😉
I really liked it because it was funny. If I was in that position I wouldn’t have known what to do.