Camping in the Amazon chapter 2

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3 Responses to Camping in the Amazon chapter 2

  1. Joe western says:

    I like the way you used the sounds at the same time on the line when you wrote the weird birds cries and the savage howling strange beasts.

  2. Rafi says:

    Wow Alexandra, I didn’t know you could write like that. Your work planted a vivid picture in my mind and also has me desperate to know what happens next. The whole time I read this I was gripping my seat in anticipation. Keep up the great work and make sure you right more on the blog.

  3. Carol Rafi's Grandma says:

    I am quite amazed by the descriptive powers of all the bloggers – well done everyone!

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