Hello Anna,
Was this incident really true?. The rhyme at the end definately added a nice touch but you could have used more adjectives.
From Rafi’s Mum.
hi Anna,
I thought that was a really funny story! I liked the rhyme at the end, it was hillarius! I think it would be fun to be on TV, and visit a TV studio,wouldn’t you? I really liked how you ended it, but you could have used more adjectives.
Great piece of work Anna I love the little rhyme at the end,how did you come up with it?
I didn’t Evan did
Hi Anna,
This is really good. The rhyme at the end is very funny!
Hello Anna,
Was this incident really true?. The rhyme at the end definately added a nice touch but you could have used more adjectives.
From Rafi’s Mum.
Very funny Anna. Is it true?
hi Anna,
I thought that was a really funny story! I liked the rhyme at the end, it was hillarius! I think it would be fun to be on TV, and visit a TV studio,wouldn’t you? I really liked how you ended it, but you could have used more adjectives.
from Nela
Hi Anna
It is all partially true.
I could have actually done that but I forgot the glue.