100 word challenge! Dear my bestest diary….

5 Responses to 100 word challenge! Dear my bestest diary….

1. Hope says:

   March 21, 2012 at 8:14 am

   I really like your 100 wc Merley its really funny and good! Well Done! The only thing that I would improve on is the number of words (you did 170!).
   • Merley says:

     March 23, 2012 at 8:17 pm

     Thanks hope for repling, by the way I really liked your bat poen just to say! Next time I will definetley count on the number of words I do!
2. Jessica says:

   March 22, 2012 at 8:27 am

   Really funny Merley,
   Try to decrease the number of words though.
   🙂
3. Sarah Ebner says:

   March 22, 2012 at 7:01 pm

   I really enjoyed this. Great writing for a four year old!!
4. Matilda says:

   March 22, 2012 at 8:30 pm

   Your piece of writing was really funny Merley,I like the way you’ve set it out because it’s not really a story but kind of facts.
   🙂

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