Your work was very good just like your other pieces. The description was phenomenal but you could have used more connectives! Remember to do a bit more than just description in your other pieces of work. Apart from that, your work was very good!
From Rafi.
Alexandra
So far I have really enjoyed your amazing descriptions and this one was just as good! Keep it up.
Your work was very good just like your other pieces. The description was phenomenal but you could have used more connectives! Remember to do a bit more than just description in your other pieces of work. Apart from that, your work was very good!
From Rafi.