Hello Anna,
Your work was impressive and I am very pleased that you did write a chapter two! This might be a bit pushy… but could you write a third chapter? Overall your work definately deserved a place on the blog!
From Rafi.
I love this piece Anna! It shows you have great skill in creating pace and tension in your writing-lots of children struggle with that, but you have it nailed! The teacher in me tells me to nag you about apostrophes, but the aunty in me tells me to shut up and tell you your writing is superb. I too would love to find out what happens to the boy on (and off) the path. Chapter three please!
Hello Anna,
Your work was impressive and I am very pleased that you did write a chapter two! This might be a bit pushy… but could you write a third chapter? Overall your work definately deserved a place on the blog!
From Rafi.
Lovely description please write another chapter!
I love this piece Anna! It shows you have great skill in creating pace and tension in your writing-lots of children struggle with that, but you have it nailed! The teacher in me tells me to nag you about apostrophes, but the aunty in me tells me to shut up and tell you your writing is superb. I too would love to find out what happens to the boy on (and off) the path. Chapter three please!
Love from
Your favourite aunty x