Good description I liked how you describe what you feel I the marathon.
Rafi – a very evocative piece of writing. I could really feel your desperation = poor thing!
Very expressive Rafi I liked the way you put yourself in the characters position.
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Good description I liked how you describe what you feel I the marathon.
Rafi – a very evocative piece of writing. I could really feel your desperation = poor thing!
Very expressive Rafi I liked the way you put yourself in the characters position.