Hi Grace,
This is an amazing piece. I really like the description and the way it sounds sort of mysterious.
I could really imagine being in the island. The only things to remember are your commas, and that once you wrote “accept” instead of “except”.
Well done! 😉
I have used part of the prompt in here with out meaning to. I wrote this before the prompt came out.
Grace – what a stunning and evocative piece of writing. You transported me straight to the island. I hope Eli is OK.
Hi Grace,
This is an amazing piece. I really like the description and the way it sounds sort of mysterious.
I could really imagine being in the island. The only things to remember are your commas, and that once you wrote “accept” instead of “except”.
Well done! 😉
Thank you for your comments, and thank you for the typing mistake. Sometimes I have so many ideas I rush and it makes my typing fly out the window!