Anna
You made is story great it had an amazing story line you used loads of great adjective to give me a picture of the libary in my head. Also you used some wonderful words to describe he voices of your characters. This was great so keep on blogging so I can read on even further!
Hi Anna, I really enjoyed reading your story, you established a distinctive tone very quickly and effectively with your choice of words; I also liked the way you built up to the prompt. I’d have liked to know the mechanics of how you actually fell into the book.
Anna
You made is story great it had an amazing story line you used loads of great adjective to give me a picture of the libary in my head. Also you used some wonderful words to describe he voices of your characters. This was great so keep on blogging so I can read on even further!
WOW Anna you have gave me a brilliant picture in my head.Also you explaind how the person was talking.
Hi Anna, I really enjoyed reading your story, you established a distinctive tone very quickly and effectively with your choice of words; I also liked the way you built up to the prompt. I’d have liked to know the mechanics of how you actually fell into the book.