well done Louis I really enjoyed this story. Here are some parts I like.
1 A straight-faced woman with a silk lilac dress peered her thin, permanently pale face plus gilded spectacles 2 I am very dissapointed on your quality.
I cant wait till your next blog.
I really like this one Louis. now we are talking. This reads like real literature. Keep at it. Don’t stop at 100 words!
Louis I loved your amazing description of the woman Elizabeth. You also used some amazing adjectives keep up the great work and don’t stop blogging!
We want to know the end of the story. I am expecting a strong reaction of the shopkeeper… Really well done.
Louis, I really enjoyed the story. I love all the description and you used the prompt really well. Keep writing!
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well done Louis I really enjoyed this story. Here are some parts I like.
1 A straight-faced woman with a silk lilac dress peered her thin, permanently pale face plus gilded spectacles
2 I am very dissapointed on your quality.
I cant wait till your next blog.
I really like this one Louis. now we are talking. This reads like real literature. Keep at it. Don’t stop at 100 words!
Louis I loved your amazing description of the woman Elizabeth. You also used some amazing adjectives keep up the great work and don’t stop blogging!
We want to know the end of the story. I am expecting a strong reaction of the shopkeeper… Really well done.
Louis, I really enjoyed the story. I love all the description and you used the prompt really well. Keep writing!