I really liked this story you used a lot of interesting words instead of said. Next time remember that I’s are always capital when by themselves but apart from that it was great.
That is a great twist at the end of your story, Beatrix! Well done, I wasn’t expecting that.
Isn’t is spelt like ‘is not’ but with the o left out, so there is an apostrophe instead! I’m sure you probably know that!
I like the idea that Freya’s suggestion: ‘it puts a story in your mind’ is reflected in you having a nightmare. The story was in your mind!
I really liked this story you used a lot of interesting words instead of said. Next time remember that I’s are always capital when by themselves but apart from that it was great.
That is a great twist at the end of your story, Beatrix! Well done, I wasn’t expecting that.
Isn’t is spelt like ‘is not’ but with the o left out, so there is an apostrophe instead! I’m sure you probably know that!
I like the idea that Freya’s suggestion: ‘it puts a story in your mind’ is reflected in you having a nightmare. The story was in your mind!