I thought this peace had a easy storyline and it was very affective how you used some awesome descriptive words. Rember next time to check before you post because you missed out one letter but never mind it was only one letter and I thought very enjoyable.
Great work! I like how you set up the main characters background, without actually saying what it was. My advice it to keep writing. You have the talent, and I believe you will be a great writer in the future!
I thought this peace had a easy storyline and it was very affective how you used some awesome descriptive words. Rember next time to check before you post because you missed out one letter but never mind it was only one letter and I thought very enjoyable.
Great work! I like how you set up the main characters background, without actually saying what it was. My advice it to keep writing. You have the talent, and I believe you will be a great writer in the future!