Hi Hope,
I really like this poem and all the rhyming words.
It is amazing that you could make it all sound great.
You need to put a comma in the last line but apart from that it is brilliant!
Well done hope!I learnt lots about hampton court in your poem,It was really good rhyming aswel! Next time maybe you could add a bit of info about the kitchens!
I thought it was a great poem, it made me laugh! It also reminded me how fun the Hampton Court trip was!
I liked all the rhymes you made, very well thought out!
Hope Hi. I thought the rhyming was very good and it had lots of facts that I learnt at Hampton Ct today. Great poem. Keep up the good work! Anna W
Hi Hope,
I really like this poem and all the rhyming words.
It is amazing that you could make it all sound great.
You need to put a comma in the last line but apart from that it is brilliant!
Well done hope!I learnt lots about hampton court in your poem,It was really good rhyming aswel! Next time maybe you could add a bit of info about the kitchens!
I thought it was a great poem, it made me laugh! It also reminded me how fun the Hampton Court trip was!
I liked all the rhymes you made, very well thought out!
I think the poem is good because it rhymes and tells you a lot about Henry VIII.But you could have talked a bit about his wives.
Hi Hope
I thought you poem was really good and descriptive.
Were did you get your ideas from?
Maybe you could say how many palaces he had.