WOW .I like your writing Merley you used some great discription i especially liked your last sentence ‘caotic car jammed road’ maybe you should have made it a bit less scary. WOW
Hi Merley,
Thank you for posting a very good peice of work. You make the blog very intresting to read. I like you descriptions at the begining, however to make it more easy to read try to put a comma in. Could you describe why Daisy hated the bullies? Well anyway, great work. Keep up the quality.
WOW .I like your writing Merley you used some great discription i especially liked your last sentence ‘caotic car jammed road’ maybe you should have made it a bit less scary. WOW
Hi Merley,
Thank you for posting a very good peice of work. You make the blog very intresting to read. I like you descriptions at the begining, however to make it more easy to read try to put a comma in. Could you describe why Daisy hated the bullies? Well anyway, great work. Keep up the quality.